Hey man, I think your design is pretty unique. I like the arms, they give off a whimsical feel. The thing I'd consider to adjust though is the 3 quarter views on your turnaround. They appear a bit too similar to the front or back views. I'd push it a little more by showing the body overlapping the furthest arm. And for the expression drawings, the right arm of the thumbs up picture looks like it isn't connected to the body. If your trying to make it appear as if he is raising that shoulder, it might help if you draw the line of the torso curving up near the arm.
On the character's name, I think you should pick a different one. West Wilder is too predictable. I would go for one that would say more about the character other than where he's from. I don't think wild would describe the character you are going for. He looks more like a happy-go-lucky kind of cowboy. So a different name would suit him better.
I like your design. On the turnaround, the profile view doesn't read well so I would recommend working on that one. I think the arms are placed wrong.
Hey man, I think your design is pretty unique. I like the arms, they give off a whimsical feel. The thing I'd consider to adjust though is the 3 quarter views on your turnaround. They appear a bit too similar to the front or back views. I'd push it a little more by showing the body overlapping the furthest arm. And for the expression drawings, the right arm of the thumbs up picture looks like it isn't connected to the body. If your trying to make it appear as if he is raising that shoulder, it might help if you draw the line of the torso curving up near the arm.
ReplyDeleteOn the character's name, I think you should pick a different one. West Wilder is too predictable. I would go for one that would say more about the character other than where he's from. I don't think wild would describe the character you are going for. He looks more like a happy-go-lucky kind of cowboy. So a different name would suit him better.
ReplyDeleteI like your design. On the turnaround, the profile view doesn't read well so I would recommend working on that one. I think the arms are placed wrong.